The Learning Centre have drawn on their developing knowledge and understanding of WW1.
The students selected one aspect about WW1 they are particularly interested in e.g.trenches, mustard gas, conscription.
The students listed all the nouns that relate to their topic in a column. They then selected interesting vocabulary to describe the visual appearance and actions of that aspect.
Then came the fun!
The students crafted the noun creatively with the verbs and adjectives for effect.
With editing, recrafting, and reorganising the ideas to paint a picture in our readers mind, we ensured our poetry, did indeed, make our reader feel what we feel, see what we see, and make our reader become involved in our poetry.
ENJOY OUR FIRST ATTEMPT AT WAR POETRY
Tuesday, 31 March 2015
Tuesday, 24 March 2015
Mrs Taylor's Writing
The prevailing scent greets as I lift my mug for the
all-important first sip, a routine well-rehearsed. Within these walls, a haven
of safety ensues. Warm coffee, favourite chair, all is well. Nonchalantly, I
recognise the signifying thud of today’s news drawing me from my slumber to
greet the outside World.
The paper, spread-eagled across the threshold, catches my
attention. Time ceases, a moment and infinity, become one. I open my eyes, unaware I had instinctively
closed out the truth splayed before me….. “New Zealand to send non-combat
training troop to Iraq” (Key, 2015). The
offending newspaper forsaken, I retraced my steps until once again safeguarded.
16 October 1914
This day was the epitome of sorrow. My heavy
heart is separated by loss. I shall miss him every day he is away on his
adventure to far lands, to join this Great War.
This day an onerous task commences – to raise
our child, the light of our eyes, our David, alone.
I have spoken at great
length to our David. Though his infant ears are too inexperienced to
comprehend, I have shared with him the photographs from today’s farewell.
Daddy standing tall and proud, his uniform a
starched protector of fragile life.
Grandma and I, our veils transparent screens to our feelings within.
David
laughed and pointed “Dada”, in his baby voice. Oh to have no fear, no worry, no understanding
of the adventures, the unknown, my love is embarking upon.
I await
his return with expectant joy…….
I had always known this time would come. My only son, James,
had always made his intentions clear. “I’m going to fight in the army when I grow
up”, he’d stated, time and time again. His whole being a resurrection of his
namesake. And, so it had become, the beginning
of the end.
15 November 1914
Today dear David and I have received a post
card from Dada. Great excitement and gaiety! My Love has arrived in the country
of Australia safe and sound! They now
prepare to travel to Egypt. My Love’s war has begun. He is excited, but I am
not.
He spoke of the eager camaraderie of soldiers, anticipating
adventure. Many of the thirty officers aboard joined them on the steel top
decks each evening to partake in card games and merriments. David loved the
photograph of the “b-b-boat”, the Star of India, Dada enclosed.
Apparently the heat was of an intenseness my
love had never before experienced. “Hotter than the year Fred Martin’s hay barn
burnt down when he packed damp bales in like weetbix in a box”. The men spent
many a night encamped on the top steel decks (Waite, 1919), and slept, surrounded
by lines of horse boxes, rather than in ovens below.
As the weeks lead towards James’ departure, I am reminded
repeatedly that people make decisions for others’ lives, “Get
some guts and join the right side”, John Key’s incitements are splashed across
newspapers as he sends NZ troops to Iraq for Isis fight (Davison, Young et al,
2015), unintentionally compelling society’s next generation to believe
equivocally, dulce et decorum est (Owen, 1918). Do I tell him? About this
truth, this truth about war? Should I stop him? Could I stop him? My life is a
ferris wheel of decisions I cannot make.
Harsh rain lashes at poignant faces, already wet. Storm
clouds frown disappointment of decisions made. Starched uniforms protect boys
in men’s clothing, still held within their mothers’ reach. Farewell day hosts an emotional kaleidoscope
of unfounded fear, screened pride, valiant love, and anticipated excitement.
Beneath my grey, battered umbrella, I shelter.
26 April 1915
My trust in this country, this war, diminishes
with each passing day. Around me I see evidence of a country desperate to win,
but at what cost? This war is a hung
trial.
If only humankind’s ability to solve issues had
progressed to the point that life was not fought with life, where peaceful
means could be used to solve issues, where people, towns, countries, respected
each other’s differences, where peace and freedom reigned. Instead, our government encourages our men to
‘die for their country’…and naive ears listen.
I have not heard from my love. It is difficult to breathe.
My
safe haven has lost its appeal. My
thoughts and I are in crowded isolation.
Is my only son amongst friend or foe?
Deathly apprehension invades my every minute. It is difficult to breathe.
30 April 1915
My love is lost.
I knew before the uniformed man, with the forced smile,
handed me the envelope of despair. The
words, already imprinted on my mind, “Regret to ……killed in
action……Gallipoli…….” blurred into lucidity.
It is apparent that freedom, peace and family, all
the things that make up a truly worthwhile and satisfying existence must
somehow be purchased using the greatest currency of all – life.
I hope no one ever has to face this reality
again. But already I know this dream is perfectly flawed.
Gingerly I push at the trap door that has divided life gone
by with present time. Dust escapes every
crevice, drifting on unmoving air, unsure where to go or how to get there. I
enter the attic like a soldier finding refuge within the confines of an allied
trench.
Mountains of history sit waiting to be remembered. Against one wall, boxes of books are stacked
as high as the roof will allow. Suitcases stuffed with clothing from days past
scatter the kauri floor, all protected by a layer of dust so thick, a gust of
wind would leave it untouched. In the middle of the floor, seemingly
highlighted by a single ray of sunlight, sits a small, wooden box.
Unlike the rest, this box is clean and polished. It is here that
I choose to sit, her box beside me, waiting expectantly. The lid lifts up easily. In our abandoned solitude, I lift out a book,
causing photographs, discoloured and eared with age to flutter to the floor
like pieces of an unfinished puzzle (Kokiri-Tangaere, 2014).
I start to read. Her
diary, the history of sadness, that has linked my Grandmother’s life to my
own…..
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